Repeat (Re-writing it!)

[hsmobsessed]

I'm writing a fanfic called Repeat. It's about a girl who goes to a cast and fan party for the movie, and meets Zac, and they end up getting picked for karaoke, and the movie basically repeats itself. What do you think? Should I post it?

[pinkbunny99]

u should post it

[hsmobsessed]

okay i'll post it as soon as i can. i need more characters. post this:

name:
age: (can be your real age or the age in the story. i can change it.)
hobbies:
what part you want:
other:

[hsmobsessed]

Repeat
Written By hsmobsessed
Based on High School Musical

This is my first fanfic on High School Musical or Zac Efron. It's going to switch from Hannah to Zac, to give it a more interesting view.

Chapter One: The Party

Hannah

"Howdy," a guy in a huge fake cowboy hat said to me as I walked in the door. I giggled. I was so excited to be here, at the High School Musical Fan and Cast Party. It was a party for fans of the new Disney Channel movie, High School Musical, where they would have food, music, dancing, and even karaoke! During karaoke, a fan would be paired up with someone from the cast to sing a song from the movie. It was going to be a blast. And of course, it was on New Years Eve.
"All right, welcome to the High School Musical Fan and Cast Party!" A guy in a blue t-shirt said on the stage. "We're about to start our karaoke, so if you want to sing the songs from High School Musical, then pray that you get picked!" The spotlights went around and landed on two people. Me and "Troy Bolton." Zac Efron.
My eyes widened. We were pushed up onto the stage at the same time. Zac smiled at me. I smiled back, but I felt sick.
"Livin' in my own world, didn't understand," Zac started. "That anything can happen, when you take a chance."
I took a deep breath and prayed that no one would laugh at me. "I never believed in, what I couldn't see," I sang. I was singing in public! "I never opened my heart."
"Ooooh."
"To all the possibilities. Ooooh."
We both started singing. "I know that something has changed, never felt this way."
"And right here tonight."
Both: "This could be the start, of something new, it feels so right, to be here with you, Ooooh. And now lookin' in your eyes, I feel in my heart, the start of something new."
"Ooh, yeah."
I started moving around a little more, and Zac and I finished the song with ease. I even fell off the stage, just like Gabriella did in the movie! It was like an exact repeat of the movie! At the end Zac decided to mimic the movie and stuck out his hand. "Zac," he said.
I laughed. "I already knew, but okay. Hannah," I said, shaking his hand.


Zac

"But seriously, you have an amazing voice," I said later, still acting out the movie. "You're a singer, right?"
"Just in my shower," Hannah replied, going along with it using her own words. "I tried a solo and nearly fainted."
"Really? Why's that?"
"I took one look at all the people staring at me, and suddenly I was staring at the ceiling. End of solo career."
"Well, with the way you sang tonight, that's pretty hard to believe," I said.
Hannah laughed. "Well, that was the first time I've ever done something like that. You sounded like you've done a lot of singing yourself."
"Yeah, my shower head is very impressed with me," I said. She laughed.
The people around us started counting down. "Eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two, one, Happy New Year!" they all cheered. Hannah and I watched the fireworks together. Then we went inside.



there's the first chapter! what do you think?

[hsmobsessed]

so what do you think? should i post more? i need at least three comments from different people before i'll post more. so tell your friends!

[Julie]

it sounds really good! post more!!

[gurlygurl]

please post more! i can't wait to find out what happens next!

[hsmobsessed]

okay sorry guys i just need one more comment and then i'll post. i haven't been on for a while and so i haven't really been posting or updating the forum. oh, btw, i'm on my friends computer so i'm not logged in because she's bugging me to get off, lol.

[hsmobsessed]

oh forget that last comment....it's probably really boring to you so i'll just post the next chapter anyways...here you go lol.

Chapter Two: The Second Song

Hannah

"All right, who's gonna rock the house next?" The guy on the stage asked, quoting the movie. The spotlights moved around the room again, and landed on who else? me and Zac.
"Come on," Zac said, pulling me on the stage. "It's What I've Been Looking For. It's not that long." I reluctantly followed Zac to the microphones. "It's hard to believe, that I couldn't see," Zac started. "That you were always right beside me."
"Thought I was alone, with no one to hold," I sang. We finished the song:

"But you were always right beside me
This feelin's like no other
I want you to know
That I've never had someone
That knows me like you do
The way you do
And I've never had someone
As good for me as you
No one like you
So lonely before
I finally found
What I've been looking for."

"Ooooh," I sang at the end. Zac smiled at me. We stepped off the stage, and I turned to Zac. "You’re right, that was fun,” I said, grinning.
“Told you so,” he said. I rolled my eyes.
We decided to take a walk and went outside. “So,” Zac said, taking my hand, “if I give you my cell phone, will you put your number in?”
“Maybe,” I said. He held up the phone and took a picture of me. “Yeah, you too,” I laughed, handing him my cell.
“Well, at least you didn’t take two seconds to take a picture and put your number in,” I said, taking my phone back and handing him his. Zac looked confused. “Well, in the movie, Troy takes her phone, takes a picture of himself, and hands it right back. It looked like there was barely any time to take a picture.”
“Oh, right,” Zac said. “I remember now. That was really stupid, but Kenny told me to just save the picture and not bother with anything else.”
“Hmm. What about the time when you were going to go meet Gabriella, and your shoes changed from white with black stripes to black with white stripes. Or maybe it was the other way around…”
Zac laughed. “I don’t remember. We probably shot those scenes on different days, or maybe I lost my shoes somehow.”
“And how about when your mic kept alternating between in the stand and in your hand during Start of Something New?”
“Um…well, we didn’t shoot the scenes in order…”
“And then there was the time-“
“Okay, okay,” Zac cut me off. “I’ll look for mistakes next time I watch it,” he said, taking my hand again.
We walked for a while without saying anything, until Zac stopped. “I was wondering…” he started.
“Yeah?”
“Do you want to go out sometime? Like, on a date?”
“Sure,” I said slowly, thinking. “When?”
“How about tomorrow? 6:30?”
I nodded. “That’s fine.” We resumed walking around the building where the party was being held. When we went back inside, I was surprised to find that they were still on Stick to the Status Quo.
“Must have been some kind of hold up,” Zac whispered.
“Why are you whispering?” I asked.
He shrugged. “I thought it might go with the ‘repeat’ of the story,” he grinned. I laughed.
“Next up we have When There Was Me and You,” Stage Guy said. “What young lady’s going to sing next?”
A girl in a red sweater got picked. She went up on the stage and the music started playing. She opened her mouth, but nothing came out. She looked terrified. “Come on,” I muttered. “Sing.”
Then she ran off the stage, shaking her head.
“Okay, we need another volunteer.”
“Go,” Zac said to me.
“Are you crazy?” I exclaimed. “I can’t sing a solo. Don’t you remember almost fainting story I told you about? It was true. This time I’ll probably throw up.”
Zac rolled his eyes. “You can sing. Go. Raise your hand.”
Stage Guy pointed to me. “You look like you want to sing.” Zac pushed me up the stage. I froze when I got up there. The music started playing. I didn’t want to be like the girl who just attempted to sing, so somehow I got the first few lines out. After the first chorus I started getting comfortable, like when we sang Start of Something New.
I was a little worried about the “and I didn’t mind” part because I usually go really high, and I didn’t want to break any windows, but by the time I got to it I was having to much fun to notice, and I guess the audience didn’t care.
I jumped off the stage excitedly. “You were right,” I admitted to Zac. He gave me a told-you-so look. “But I’m not singing again tonight,” I added.
Zac gave a fake disappointed look. “Fine,” he said glumly. I playfully hit his shoulder. “Ow!” He pretended to look hurt.
“I can smack you a lot harder than that,” I laughed. My cell phone rang. “Hold on,” I said to Zac, walking outside and answering it. “Hello?”
It was my mom. “Hannah, I have some horrible news.”


Zac

When Hannah didn’t come back for a while after her cell phone rang, I started worrying and decided to follow her outside. I saw her standing facing the street, her back to me, her shoulders shaking.
“Hannah?” I said softly. She turned to me, and I saw her face was tear-stained. I went up and took her in my arms. “What’s wrong?” I asked, concerned.

[hsmobsessed]

Okay, I'm re-writing this fic and the story line is going to be completly different. So just hold your horses, and I'll have it up soon.

[laex]

alright!!
nice nice nice!
yay!!

hahas.
please keep writing!
this is cool! ((:
write some more!
please please please!!!



but i'm sorry to say that it may be kind of messy,

as in....
somewhat a lil difficult to read.
I don't really know how to explain it...
but it seems like its hard to switch in between the REAL musical and the fanfiction. ((:

[laex]

and by the way, can i be....
uh....sharpay?
gee. sounds cool.
pretty please??

name: laex
age: story age 22
hobbies: stage acts/musicals/dance performance
what part you want:sharpay's role
other: -nil-